One more question about this analogy essay!!!!! Help please?
I know I already asked this before but I came up with a more solid idea and I’m wondering if this would be okay.
Btw, this essay just needs to have 2 body paragraphs so I don’t need much support.
I would use “drugs are like halloween, they both change peoples identities and they form addiction.”
Halloween uses costumes to change peoples identites, and drugs change people too.
Children want candy therefore they go trick or treating to feed their addiction, while teenagers get addicted to drugs.
So is this okay as an analogy?
I’ve been trying to brainstorm for THREE hours now, lol. I’m just about ready to email my teacher and beg her for help and mercy.
Thank you to everyone that helped last time and I greatly appreciate it if anyone will help me. 
I’m not sure that is the best analogy, for though technically it is good drugs are negative and Halloween is a much-loved holiday. Also drugs change people’s identities as in who they are, yet Halloween only changes their appearance. Try thinking of a negative thing instead.
